Hi Ivy,I like how on your slides you made the picture like it's pinned on and how you circled your face. It reminded me of the real camp! Maybe you could have added a little more info in the blurb, but other than that it was great.-Ella
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Hi Ivy,I like how on your slides you made the picture like it's pinned on and how you circled your face. It reminded me of the real camp! Maybe you could have added a little more info in the blurb, but other than that it was great.-Ella
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ReplyDeleteCamp was so fun great job on the slide