Tuesday 18 June 2019

Quick write: My Wild and Wacky Creature

My wild and wacky creature has a long slim body packed with three layers of shiny blue scales that glisten in the sunlight.  It's see through spikes are as sharp as a shard of glass and as strong as titanium.  His fore strong legs have have razor sharp claws on the end of each foot that are as white as clean white snow and as big as a two meter tall chair.  His legs are different because he has the legs of a chicken. his tail is different to because it is not  a long thin tail it is a pompom.

  My wild and wacky creature has a two meter long neck with spikes perfectly lined up going down it's long neck.  His head has a long snout with jagged teeth and nostrils with smoke coming out of them.  It also has a long wet tongue with a split in the middle.  It's two huge horns are as yellow as the sun and are as sharp as mums kitchen knife.  It's wings has feathers as soft as a sheep's wool but as big as a move thertis tv and the color is light blue.  At the end of each wing there is a yellow horn only as big as two A4 pieces of paper.  The are as sharp as a giant pair of scissors cutting you with all of it's strength.

His eyes are blue when happy green when scared and red when angry they are probably as big as an elephants head.  It likes to eat pigs, sheeps and cows.  He sneaks up along the grass and then when hes close unuth he will pounce on whatever he's trying to get.  If his prey is flying he would fly a bit hide a bit fly a bit hide a bit fly a bit hide a bit until he is close anuth then he will pounce.  It's abilities are to roar, fly, dig, dive, make clouds and breath fire.  It likes to hide in bushes, trees and clouds.  He lives in an Australian jungle near a smoothly flowing river that once a day he would quietly go and have a drink.  And that's my wild and wacky creature.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ivy,
    I like how you used lots of adjectives and explained your creature well. You are really creative with your creature and added things I wouldn't have even thought about. This blog post reminds me of a storey I write a few years ago about my monster friend. My monster had three arms on each side. Did you have fun creating your creature?
    From Sarah

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about