Thursday 24 June 2021

Quick-Write; Story Starter: Suddenly, His Phone Rang...

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  If you were wondering why the title was so long or the "suddenly, his phone rang" part, here is a little exclamation about what I'm doing. We got to choose a story starter to write a quick story, so I chose "suddenly, his phone rang". We got to choose what the story was about so mine was 100% about dragons.  Here is my quick story down below, I hope you like it. 

Suddenly, his phone rang. When I say phone, I mean his dream-visitor. It was flashing and vibrating all over his bed, leaves and feather wrinkling under the sapphira. Starkeeper was mumbling tiredly after being woken up from his deep snooze. He looked up at the night sky, only two of the three moons were visible that night, but still bright. The moons gleam reflected off of Starkeeper's dark grey scales, turning them a beautiful silver colour. He took his gaze off the stars and turned his head to look down at the sapphira dream-visitor, thinking whether or not to place it in his talons. What if it is my sister? What if she has found a way to communicate to me? He finally thought of his decision. His talons twiched towards the dream-visitor, slowly grasping it in his hands.

Nightgazer?

"Hello, Starkeeper."

Starkeeper dropped the dream-visitor from his forehead in shock to hear an unfamiliar voice. It was definitely not Nightgazer. That was a male dragon who spoke to him through the dream-visitor. Starkeeper wasn't even sure that he had met a male dragon besides his father, now peacefully in his grave, taken away from Starkeeper by the horrid war. Starkeepers father fought hard in the war, not hard enough. As Starkeeper thought about his father, tears rolled down his cheeks. Stupid war...  

2 comments:

  1. Ivy!, you have a really good blog, the last part was really sad, but other than that it was fantastic! Ivy, you're going to be a really good author some day! and a really good artist! Hey, can you draw me a dragon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Meh, you don't need anything to improve on! You're using really good info and more detailed describing words! Keep it up and leave dragons to rule over your world! {I meant you as the dragon Queen}

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  2. Hi Ivy!
    Wow! That was one of the best posts you have done!
    You should be a writer! Your story reminds me of wings of fire it's technically the same! I can't wait to see what you have come up with next!
    What is a sapphira?

    Cornelia

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